Anyway, I was very interested in a bread baking article in the current New Yorker magazine by Adam Gopnik and found his writing fun reading. At one point I said to myseslf, this prose is in nearly poetry - the word "Ozamandias" was the trigger to make me look at several sentences leading up to that unlike name. At the same time, I'd been mulling the poetry prompt for this week's class and was not inspired. The class is so relaxed and open ended that I didn't feel apologetic about not having anything on the prompt. But I really enjoy writing poetry and reading what I write and I'm aware of the idea of "found poetry" which one fines in prose no matter where that prose may be, a passage that can be arranged as poetry -- as it is or with some judacious cuts of phrases that seem unnecessary to a poem.
Once I happened upon "Ozamandias", I read back and saw that, indeed, within a couple of paragraphs was a very amusing poem -- minus a phrase here, a couple of words there. I also went to Google and read Shelley's wonderful poem to make sure it fit -- pondered happily for some minutes m memory of having see the statue (or so a guide said) that inspired that immortal poem. For some more minutes I remembered the whoele afternoon in the Valley of the Kings and the thoughts then and since about that ancient empire and its stunning constructions still moving and magnificent despite three to four centuries of ruination.
So here is the poem I read to my class (with appropriate reference to its original author)
About Bread
Yeast is really just a bunch
of bugs
Rooming together, like
Oberlon grads in Brooklyn.
Eukaryotic organisms of the
fungus kingdom,
Kin of mushrooms.
When you mix the little bugs
with carbohydrates –
Wheat is a good one –
They begin to eat up all the
oxygen.
Then they pass gas made up of
ethyl alcohol
And carbon dioxide.
The carbon dioxide makes
bread,
The gas they pass makes
alcoholic spirits
And it makes the dough rise.
It puts the bubbles in the
bread.
The high heat of the of the
oven simply kills
The remaining little bugs,
leaving their work in place.
The tasty bits of your
morning toast are all tombs
Of tiny dead creatures – the
Ozymandias phenomenon
On a tiny scale. Look on my works, you mighty,
And eat them with apricot
jam.
Found Poem --
J. Calender, from The New Yorker 11-4-13
“Bread and Women”, Adam Gopnik
3 comments:
LOL. With that mental image I may have to stop eating bread! Beautiful poem tho.
Humor -- will think of this when I eat my peanut butter and honey on bread for my lunch today. good post -- barbara
Thanks Bev and Barbara. My poetry class enjoyed that found bit too.
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